Thursday 15 May 2014

Main , Meri Family aur Mera Gaon

Introduction

Mera naam Avi hai. Main jab ** saal ka tha tab mera maa aur pitaji ki ek road accident me death ho gayi.

Mere pitaji ko ek chota bhai aur teen bahen hai . Mere pitaji paacho bhai baheno me bade hai.
Pitaji(death)-35
Pooja(badi bua)- 32
Neha(2nd bua)-30
Neeta(choti bua, judwa bahan neha)-30
Chacha-28
1st Chachi-26
2nd chachi-23
3rd chachi-18
(mere chacha ne 3 saadi ki hai, kyu ki meri badi chachi aur majeli chachi ko kohi bacha nahi tha . Is liye Mere chacha ne thisri saadi ki.
Meri badi chachi ka naam Suman hai .
majeli chachi ka naam Seema hai.
aur choti chachi ka naam Meena hai.
Pooja bua ko 2 beti aur 1beta hai .
Badi beti ka naam Sweta aur choti beti ka naam Sital aur bete ka naam Raj hai .
Neha bua ko 2 beti hai Komal aur Kavita. Neha bua ko main bilkul bhi pasand nahi hu .wo hamesh muze marati aur galiya deti hai.
Neeta bua ko 1 beta aur 1 beti hai. Dono judwa hai. Beti ka naam Leena aur bete ka naam Rajesh hai.

Mere sabi bhai aur bahene muzse chote hai ,sirf Pooja bua ke dono betiyo ko chod ke kyuki meri bua ne 18 saal ke umar me saadi ki thi.
Mere maa aur pitaji ke death ke bad mere dadaji ne muze apne gaon mere chacha ke sath rahane ko kaha. Meri badi chachi muze apne ghar lane ke liye dadaji ko kaha tha. Meri teeno bua aur mere chacha ek hi gaon me rahte hai.

Update 2 & 3

Meri badi chachi muje meri maa jaisa pyar karti hai. Muje kabi bhi meri maa ki kami mahasus nahi hui . Meri theno chachi muje apne bete jaisa pyar karati hai. Par mere chacha meri theno chachi ko hamesha galiya dete hai. Neha bua aur pooja bhi meri chachi ko galiya deti hai. Meri theno bua ke pati dubai me kam karate hai sal me 1 mahine ke liye gaon aate hai.
Mere chacha ka ghar-
Mere chacha ke ghar me 3 bedroom hai. 1st bedroom me chacha aur choti chachi ka hai. 2nd bedroom seema chachi aur suman chachi ka hai aur 3rd bedroom muje diya hai. Mere dadaji ghar ke store room me rahate hai .unki bimari ke vajase une store room ko saf karake dadaji ko deya .
Mere dadaji muje bohat pyar karate hai kuki meri badi bua pooja ko dono betiya hui aur uske bad mera janam huva .main meri family me sabse bada ladka honese mere dadaji muze sabse jada pyar karate hai.
Mera admission goan ke patsala me kiya . meri zindgi achse chal rahi hai. Jab main 10 class me gaya tab mere school me mere dost nagi picture dek kar unki bate karate hai. Muje bhi picture dek kar kuch hota tha tab muje pata nahi tha ki mera lund kada ku hota hai .
Ek din main meri pooja bua ke ghar kam ke liye gaya tha .main hamesh dekta tha ki pooja bua ke saheli ka bhai rakesh har mahine me ek din ke aata hai. Aur jab bhi pooja bua ke saheli bhai rakesh ghar aata tab bua apne bacho ko picture dekane ya pir chacha ke ghar khelne bejeti thi. us din bhi pooja bua ne apne bacho ko picture dekne bej diya. Mere chacha ne muje pooja chachi ke ghar unke paise dene ke liye bheja .
Jab main bua ke ghar pe gaya to ghar pe kohi nahi dika .main jab bua ke room ke pass gaya tab main jo deka usper muje vishwas nahi ho raha tha .
Bua ke dood rakesh choos raha tha .bua bhi ajib ajib aavaje nikal rahi thi. Aab bua ke saheli ka bhai rakesh bua ki peticoat me hat dal kar unka nada kol diya. Bua ab bilkul nagi ho chuki thi .rakesh ne bhi apne kapde nikal diye . Rakesh lund lagbag 6 inch ka tha . bua ne rakesh ko choot chat ne ke liye ka par rakesh ne mana kiya aur apna lund bua ke choot me dal diya . suki choot me lund dalne se bua jor se chik padi. par rakesh ne us chik ki parva kiye bhina hi apne lund ko apni bahen ki saheli ki choot me dal kar dakke pe dakke de raha tha.
lagbag 10 minute tak dakke lagane ke bad rakesh jor se chil kar bua ke uper gir gaya.
bua- kya rakesh tum hamesa bina meri choot chate hi apna lund meri choot me dal dete ho
rakesh- pooja tume to pata hai muze choot chat na pasand nahi hai
bua-tum meri choot ko gila kiye bina hi lund pel dete ho
rakesh-kya karu ab to aadat ho gayi hai
bua-ha ye tumari purani aadat hai ab muze bi aadat ho gahi hai
rakesh- ha ab 6 sal se tumari chudai kar raha hu ab bhi tum vaise hi chudai ka maza le rahi ho jaise pahali bar chud rahi ho
bua-tum meri suki choot me lund daloge to meri chik nahi to kya hasi niklengi
rakesh-isi le to main tumare bacho ko picture dekne bhejta hu
bua-tum bahot hi chalak ho hamesa kisi na kisi bahane meri choot marne aa jate ho
rakesh-kya karu meri biwi tumari tara chudai me mera sath nahi deti hai.
bua-ab uto bache aane vale honge
rakesh-ha uta hu
main ye bate sunkar jaldi se ghar ke bahar aaya.pir thodi der bad maine ghar ka darvaja khat khataya pooja bua me muje under aane ko kaha aur rakesh ke pas chod kar under chali gayi.
rakesh- kya bat hai Avi , kya huaa, aise chup ku ho
Avi-kuch nahi baiya thodi tabiyat kharab hai
rakesh-ku kya hua
Avi-kuch nahi wo...
Rakesh-aare ye wo wo kya laga rahe ho
Avi-(tumari chudai dek kar pareshan hu) kuch nahi baiya aise hi
rakesh-aare yar tum muze apna dost samajkar bata do .daro mat
Avi-(ise cuthiya banata hu) baiya yo ka hai ki mere class ke ladke gandi picture dek kar muze bolte hai ki ye dek teri pooja bua kaise nagi hai , ye dek teri bua ke dood kitne bade hai.muze unper gussa aat hai
rakesh-dek Avi , tumari bua ke bareme kohi bhi kuch kahe unper gussa mat kara karo , log kitna bhi kuch kahe pir bhi tumari bua aakir tumari bua hai
Avi-ha aap tik kai rahe ho
bua-Avi ye lo paise .apne chacha ko de do
Avi-tik hai bua ab main chalta hu . acha baiya pir milte hai.


Update 4

Jab main ghar aa to choti chachi apni saheli jo ki nurse use bat kar rahi thi. Maine paise choti chachi ko diye aur apne room me sone chala gaya.
Choti chachi-ha riya tune mera kam kiya
Saheli(riya)- ha , teri report lekar aai hu
Choti chachi-dika kya lika hai
Saheli-wo kya hai ki ..
Choti chachi-ye ka wo wo laga raka hai .dena report
Saheli-ye le
Choti chachi-yar muze to kuch samaj nahi aa raha hai
Saheli-yar isme lika hai ki.....
Choti chachi-haa bol na
Saheli- wo kya hai ki
Choti chachi-ab bole gi bi ki nahi
Saheli- wo tere sare test positive hai
Choti chachi-aur Avi ke chacha ke
Saheli- wo Negative hai
Choti chachi-matlab
Saheli- Tere pati me cum me sperm bahot kam hai aur jo sperm hai wo kamjor hai , matlab tera pati tuze kabi bhi maa nahi bana sakta
Choti chachi-kya bat kar rahi hai tu .
Saheli- yar yahi sach hai
Choti chachi-nahi yar, mera pati to 20 minute tak meri chudai karta hai.aur mera to do ya teen bar pani nikalta hai
Saheli- wo sab tik hai par tera pati kabi bhi bap nahi ban sakta
Choti chachi-lekin
Saheli- jada der tak chudai karne se todehi bap bante hai , wo to sperm pe depend karta hai
Choti chachi-to main kya karu .Avi ke chacha to meri hi galati mante hai
Saheli-yar tu ek kam kar kisi aur ka sperm apne under le ke bacha paida kar
Choti chachi-per Avi ke chacha nahi manege
Saheli- to tu Avi ke chacha ko mat bata aur mere sat hospital chal terd kam kar deti hu.kisiko pata nahi chalenga
Choti chachi-par ye galat hai
Saheli- kuch galat nahi hai , sahar me to aisa roj hota hai
Choti chachi-nahi yar main aisa nahi karungi
Saheli- tik hai mat kar mera kya jata hai
Choti chachi-yar tu gussa mat kar
Saheli-nahi main gussa nahi hu
Choti chachi-wo jane de ye bata tera pati aur bache kaise hai
Saheli- are yar teri report ke chakar me ye to batana hi bhul gayi ki ,mere pati ka transfer ho gaya hai .aur hum is sunday ye sahar chod kar ja rahf hai surat ko
Choti chachi-ye ka tu bi muze chod kar ja rahi hai
Saheli- are yar jana to padega
chal ab main chalti hu
Choti chachi- ha tik hai ,call karti rahana
Saheli-ha karungi bye ab sahar bhi jana hai nahi to bus nikal jayengi
chachi-(riya ke jane ke bad ) riya tune meri ek bahot badi pareshani dur kar di. ab main jad hi maa banugi par pata nahi uska bap kon hoga. mere sat suman aur seema bhi maa ban jayegi. ab sirf hone wale bache ka bap khojna padenga. aur ye report jal gaya...


Update 5

Karib 4 baje meri nid kul gayi. Maine deka meri pant per ek dag laga hua hai .main apni paint utari to meri chadi per bhi dag laga hua hai .maine turant chaddi nikal di aur dusre kapde pahan kar bahar khelne chala gaya.
Main cricket khel raha tha tab ball ground ke pass wale store house me chali gayi . Wo store house hamesa band rahata hai to sab bache apne apne ghar chale gaye par ball meri thi isi liye maine ball dudne ka paisala kiya .
Lagbag 6 baj rahe the aur suraj bhi dal chuka tha.
Main store house ke piche chala gaya aur koyi khidki dudne laga. Tabi muze ek khidki khuli mil gayi. Main chupke se ander gaya aur ball dudne laga.
par store house bada tha aur andera bhi ho chuka tha ki tabi muze khidki se kuch ladke ander aate dikayi diye. main jaldi se chup gaya . main ne deka mera school ke 12 class ke do ladke aur unike class ki ladki under aa gaye aur ghass par baite gaye.
wo ladki dono ladko ke bich baiti thi aur dono ladke uske dood daba rahe the .
1st ladka-tere aam to must hai
2nd ladka-haa yar iske aam aur tarbuja dono must hai
ladki-tu kya sirf bate karne aahe .Ya pir kuch karoge bhi
1st ladka-tere lip to bohat meete hai main to din bhar is choosta rahu
2nd ladka-jadi apne kapde utar ab control nahi hota hai
ladki-haa utar rahi hu muze bi kaha control ho raha hai .jab se tum dono me ye aadat laga di hai tab se muze meri choot me kuzali ho rahi hai.
1st ladka-le mera lund choose
2nd ladka-teri choot chat kar saf karta hu
ladki-aaha... must maza aa raha hai.
1st ladka-yar ab tu meri jaga aa aur main teri jaga aata hu
2nd ladka- aa aa jaldi aa
ladki- kya choosna laga rahe ho pahale meri choot mara
thodi der choot chat ne ke bad us ladke ne apna lund ladki choot me dal diya aur dakke marne laga auq dusra ladka apna lund ladki ke mu me dalkar chodne laga
ab pir se dono ne apni jaga change ki aur chudai suru ki

main bhi apna lund bahar nikala .mera lund hard ho gaya tha . main ne apnd hath thoda aage piche karne laga .muze acha lag raha tha.pir main ne hath ko jor jor hilana suru kiya.
uder dono ladko ne apni speed bada di.pir thodi der bad hafne lage .muze bhi laga ki mera su su nikal jayega .par mera su su ke jaga par kuch safad aur gada pani nikal gaya. muze aisa laga jaise mere uper kisine 100kg saman raha ho auq ab wo saman mere uper se nikal gaya. halka sa mahasus kar raha tha.
1st ladka-yar aaj pir maza aa gaya
2nd ladka- ha yar is ki lene me bahot maza aata hai
ladki-main to tak gayi yar 1 sal se tum meri chudai kar rahe ho. kal pir milte hai isi jaga par tik hai chalo
wo teeno bahar chale gaye.main bhi bahar chala gaya kuki muze us ladki ka chehara dekna tha .jab main bahar aaya to deka do ladke ped ke pass khade hai .muze laga ki ye do no vahi hai par ladki nahi hai unke sat . thodi der bad ped pichese ek ladki bahar aai. ye kya ye to Mona hai. aur ye kya dono ladko me se ek uske bhai hai . ladka uska bada bhai jo 2 sal se 12 class me fail ho raha hai aur dusra uska boyfriend(bachpan me uski aur mona ki sadi fix ki gayi hai) jise uski sadi hone wali hai. mona ka boy friend bhi 2 sal se 12 class me fail ho raha hai.

pir wo teeno chale gaye . main bhi ghar aakar khana khaya aur soch raha ki aaj ke din main do chudai deki . meri bua aur uske saheli ka bhai. mona aur uske apne sage bhai aur hone wale pati ki chudai. main soch raha tha ki aaj tak muze lund choot aur chudai jaise word pata te par aaj muze uska asli meaning samaj me aaya .jo sahyad hi muze kohi bata sakata. ab muye bhi chudai karni thi par kaise aur kiske sat wo pata nahi.


Update 6

Next day
main sabhere sabhere hi school chala gaya . Mera school 7.00am to 11.30am hai. Aaj hamare internal exam ki mark sheet hame mil gayi. Math subject me muze sab se jada mark mile (70/100). Main apne class me math subject me top kiya .todi der bad lunch break huaa. Main bahar ground me khelne laga.tabi humare math subject ki teacher ne muze bulaya.
Madam-Avi beta tumare mark to ache aahe hai
Avi- haa mam ache aahe hai. Sab aap ke vajase huaa.
Madam-is me main me kya kiya. ye to tumari mehnat ka phal hai
Avi- lekin jo purane sir te to muze math se dar lagta par aap kitne ache aur simple tarike se padati ho
Madam-aisa kuch nahi hai. sab teacher ke padane ke tarike alag hote hai. kisi ko mera padana acha lagta hai aur kisi ko purane sir ka.
Avi- pir bhi aap ke vajase hi muze mark mile hai.
Madam-meri tarif mat karo main to sirf 6 month ke liye tumare school padane aai hu. aur ab to sirf 1 month hi baki hai .pir main chali jaungi. tum pirse purane sir se hi padana padenga.
Avi-par mam aap hamesa ke liye hamare school me ku nahi padati ho
Madam- nahi Avi muze vapas apne school jana hoga . ye to kuch experiment karne ke vajase main is school aur tumare sir mere schonl pada rahe hai. ye hum check kar rahe hai ki sahar aur gaon me padane me anter aur mental capacity me kuch badlav aata hai ya pir ham jis tarike se pada rahe hai vahi tarika tik hai. ye transfer experiment se dono ka hi phada hai. student ko naye teacher mil rahe hai aur teacher ko naya experience mil jayega.
Avi-to pir aap chali jayegi
Madam- ha jana to padega aur main ya main akeli hu. mere husband aur bache to sahar hai. muze to jana padega.
Avi- par mam aap hamesa meri best teacher rahegi
Madam-ye sab chodo .muze principle ne ka ki tum math me top kar sakate ho ager tum ache se mehanat karoge to
Avi-main to puri mehnat kar raha hu madam
Madam-are aisa nahi hai . tume aur jada padana padega aur jada practise karani padegi.
Avi-tik hai mam main puri mehnat karunga.
Madam-principle sir ne kaha ki main tume school ke bad bhi padau. kya tum muzese padene ko tayar ho
Avi- ha ku nahi mam main duphere main aap ke ghar aa jaunga.
Madam-ha ye tik hai. tum mere ghar hi aa jav. principle sir to kaye rahate ki school me hi padana padega par main sir ko samja dugi. aaj 3.00pm baje aa jana. aur ha sath me baki subject tayari bhi karna.
Avi- tik hai mam main aa jaunga.
Madam-ye deko lunch break bhi khatam hua .chalo jav apne class me.
Avi-ok mam
class me aate hi main moma ke bare me sochne laga. kitne gore dood the mona ke.kitni achi dik rahi ti bina kapdo ke. main sapno me khoya tha ki pata chala ki aaj history subject ke teacher nahi aahe hai . to hame bahar ground par khelne bej diya.
ground par 12 class ke student bhi khel rahe te .hum bhi khel ne lag gaye. par muze moma aur uska boyfriend kahi bhi nahi dik rahe the. main une dundane lag gaya. dundate dundate main sport room ke pass ja ke deka to mona ka bhai bahar khada hai aur sport room ka darvaja under se band hai. muze laga ki mona aur uska b.f. under chudai kar rahe hoge isi liye main sport room ki khidki se dekne gaya.
par under to mona aur uska b.f. aur hamare principle sir hai aur vo bhi nange.
mona-sir jaldi meri chudai karo jada time nahi hai
sir- chup kar kutti sali . chup chap mera lund choose pahale
b.f.-mona choose na jaldi ku natak kar rahi ho
mona- ha kar to rahi hu
sir- chal chod wo sab chal jaldi kutti ki tara baite
mona-yelo sir ban gayi aap ki kutti
sir- ab dek tera kutta kaise tuze bokne lagata hai. aur isi ke sat sir le apna lund mona ke choot me dal diya aur dakke lagane lage. karib 10minute ke bad chudai katam ho gayi.
b.f.-sir ab to hum pass ho jayenge na?
mona-ha sir ab ine pass kar do
sir-tik hai teri chudai ka phal to tuze mil jayega. tere bhai aur tere b.f. ko pass kara dunga
b.f.- thank u sir
mona-chalo kapde pahane do
sir- ha chalo bahot der ho gayi. ab main chalta hu . nahi to logo ko sak ho jayega
sir ke room se bahar janeke bad moma ka bhai under aa gaya.
mona-chalo tumara kam ho gaya
mona ka bhai -abhi kaha abhi to hum bi teri chudai karani hai
b.f.- ha yar sir ki chudai dek kar main bi garam ho gaya hu
mona-nahi abi nahi sham ko store house me karana
b.f.- per yaha ku nahi.
mona-yaha risk hai samaja karo mere sajan
b.f.-chal tik hai .
mona ka bhai- ha chalo
teeno sport room se chal gaye aur main bhi mona aur sir ki chudai dek kar khush ho gaya aur apne ghar chala gaya


Update 7

Main ghar aane par meri badi chachi ne muze khana kilaya. Mere khana kane ke bad main ne meri mark sheet teeno chachi ko dikai. Choti chachi ne meri tarif ki aur jada mark lane ko kaha.
Avi- chachi main aaj se mere math ke teacher se padne jaunga
C chachi-ye to achi bat hai
B chachi- par wo paise bhi lengi ya pir aise hi padayegi
Avi-nahi chachi wo principle sir ne une kaha ki muze padaye. To madam paise nahi lengi
M chachi-mera beta itna pyara hai ki use kohi paise le hi nahi sakta
Avi-kya chachi ,aap bi na
B chachi-seema ku Avi ko pareshan kar rahi ho
M chachi- didi main kaha preshan kar rahi hu . main apne bete ki tarif kar rahi hu.
C chachi-ha pata hai teri tarif karana.
B chachi-are ab tum dono zagada band karo
M chachi-tik hai didi
Avi-chachi main sone ja raha hu . muze dopeher ko uta dena
B chachi-ha sojo ,main tuze uta dungi
Avi apne room me chala gaya.
M chachi-meena kal teri saheli aai thi na .
C chachi-ha aai thi
M chachi-kya wo report lekar aai thi kya
C chachi-haa report to layi thi.
B chachi-kya lika tha usme
M chachi-ha ha kya lika tha usme bata na jaldi
C chachi-wo report to main jala di
B chachi-kya bak rahi hai tu , tune report jala di.
M chachi-meena tune kya kiya report jala di. kitni muskil se main wo sample liye the .aur tune jala diye. pagal kahi ki.
C chachi-ha jala di, ku ki muze wahi tik laga
B chachi-matlab
C chachi- main report pad kar jala di.
M chachi-tune report padi ...bata na usme kya lika tha.
B chachi-bata na meena ki main kabi maa ban sakti hu ki nahi
M chachi-bata na meena
C chachi-ha ham teeno maa ban sakati hai
B chachi-kya tu sach kah rahi ho meena
C chachi-Ha main sach kah rahi hu
B chachi-meena tuze pata nahi ki tune kitni achi khabar sunai hai.
M chachi-ye zhut bol rahi hai
B chachi-kya?
M chachi-ha ye zhut bol rahi hai.
C chachi-nahi didi main sach kah rahi hu
M chachi-agar tu sach kah rahi hai to ab tak ham maa ku nahi ban saki .
C chachi-didi meri puri bat sun lo
B chachi-ha ha bol meena ,kya hai puri bat
C chachi-hum to maa ban sakati hai par Avi ke chacha kabi bap nahi ban sakate hai
M chachi-kya bol rahi hai meena tu. agar ham maa ban sakati hai to Avi ke chacha to ban jayege na?
C chachi-Avi ke chacha kabi bi bap nahi ban sakte
B chachi-rote hu ye .pir ham kaise maa ban sakati hai
M chachi-mere dimag me jo bat chal rahi wo to nahi soch rahi ho tu meena
B chachi-ab tere dimag me kya chal raha hag seema
M chachi-muze lagta hai meena ye soch rahi hai ki Avi ke chacha bap nahi ban sakta par ham maa ban sakati hai. haina meena
C chachi-haa
B chachi-to pir
M chachi-meena kah rahi hai Avi ke chacha bap nahi ban sakte to kya ham to maa ban sakti hai
B chachi-ye kya ek hi bat bar bar bol rahi hai tu seema .tera dimag to kharab nahi hua hai.
M chachi-nahi didi mera dimag kharab nahi hua. aap meri bat nahi samaj rahhi ho
C chachi-didi agar ham ne kisi aur ke sat chudai ki to ham maa ban sakti hai
B chachi-kya bak rahi ho meena .tera dimag sach me kharab ho gaya hai
M chachi-didi meena ki puri bat to sun lo
B chachi-tik hai.bol ka bolna chati ho
C chachi-deko didi Avi ke chacha kabi bi bap nahi ban sakte. agar ham ne jaldi hi kuch nahi kiya to sayed Avi ke chacha aur ek sadi kar le . rahi bat ki Avi ke chacha bap nahi ban sakte ,ye sirf ham teeno ko pata hai .Avi ke chacha ko nahi
B chachi-aur teri saheli riya , use to pata hai na
C chachi-Ha use pata hai par wo is sunday ko sahar chod kar dusre sahar ja rahi hai aur wo sahar bahot dur hai. aur usne ka ki wo kabi vapas nahi aayegi.
B chachi-par main abi tak nahi samji ki tu kahna kya chahti hai
C chachi-deko didi ham kisi aur ke sat chudai kar ke maa banegi par logo ke liye uska bap Avi ke chacha hi rahenge
M chachi-wo kaise
B chachi-ha ha wo kaise
C chachi-Ham aise insan ko dundenge jo hame maa bana de aur pir ye gaon ya sahar chod kar chala jaye jise hame aage jaker ko preshani nahi ho
B chachi-lekin
M chachi-muze to meena ki sahi lagi
C chachi-didi aap jada mat socho main sab samal lungi
B chachi-par Avi ke chacha
C chachi-didi aap jada mat socho . sab muz rar chod dijiye. sirf aap ha kah dijiye
B chachi-par muze kuch samaj nahi aa raha hai. Avi ke chacha ke sath main doka nahi de sakti
M chachi-kya didi , jab Avi ke chacha ne dusri aur pir tisri sadi ki tab aap ko duk nahi huaa. agar Avi ke chacha aur ke sadi karenge tab aap ko acha lagenga
meena tu kuch bi kar hame maa bana de .didi ki chinta tum mat karo jab wo maa ban jayengi tab une kuch bura nahi lagenga.
C chachi-tik hai main apne kam me lag jati hu . main apne bacho ka ek dam dar bap dund lungi.
B chachi-tik hai jaisa tum dono tik samjo . par dyan se karana jobi tum karana chahati ho
M chachi-ye hui na bat didi.
B chachi-chalo jav tu aaram karo main Avi ko uta deti hu.

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